Coooool. I'm really psyched to see this in action and on the page, John. I'm curious to see what's different and what's the same as in AW. Will this be a complete text or will it build off of the AW book for the core rules of play?

A couple of things, because a quick copyedit is how I express my love:
• "[PC] needs me to look out for them. Take bond +1 with them." This "bond +1" looks like it has an extra space, compared with the others in its column.
• "get+1 to any stat (max +3)" This is lacking the space that the "get +1battle" and other items have upwards on the list.

Seeing the game's language in this other context is really interesting to me. I still read "roll+battle instead of roll+lucky" as having the broken-English post-apoc style in it (because the verb gets either repeated weirdly in my head, or because there is no verb—I'm still not sure how to read the "roll+trait" language), which is curious. I'm really looking forward to seeing what sort of voice you've given the manuscript for The Regiment. Consider my curiosity piqued and eager!